http://www.lifeiswhatyoumakeofit.com/2009/03/03/what-do-you-want-to-be-when-you-grow-up/ “A Photographer Who Happens to Love to Write” Wed, 04 Jan 2012 11:36:14 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 http://www.lifeiswhatyoumakeofit.com/2009/03/03/what-do-you-want-to-be-when-you-grow-up/comment-page-1/#comment-5690 Ben Wed, 04 Mar 2009 06:51:40 +0000 http://lifeiswhatyoumakeofit.com/?p=427#comment-5690 Ekill this should have been three seperate articles. Probably not a bunch of articles in one post. They were all interesting mostly because I know you. They seemed more like unfocused musings which is cool but to people who don't know you might be confused by where you're going with the post. The one that really caught my eye was the last one which you should have titled "Mindless Monkey shit" that's how you draw the reader in right there. That was the gold one that should've been soley posted as it was focused and the other one's needed a little work. Also calling females "chicks" by the moderator of the website is not pc at all, but funny as hell, you don't wanna scare away the potential females readers or piss off the feminist women. Just my advice. Ekill this should have been three seperate articles. Probably not a bunch of articles in one post. They were all interesting mostly because I know you. They seemed more like unfocused musings which is cool but to people who don’t know you might be confused by where you’re going with the post. The one that really caught my eye was the last one which you should have titled “Mindless Monkey shit” that’s how you draw the reader in right there. That was the gold one that should’ve been soley posted as it was focused and the other one’s needed a little work. Also calling females “chicks” by the moderator of the website is not pc at all, but funny as hell, you don’t wanna scare away the potential females readers or piss off the feminist women. Just my advice.

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